Could use advice on my personal mission and vision statements.?
“Live freely, love fully, and learn fruitfully.”
Mission Statement: To live life fully, grow and learn every day without fear, with the knowledge that all things are possible if one sets their mind to finding an answer.
Vision Statement: I am financially and physically fit with multiple sources of income and create a lasting positive impact on the lives of those around me.
I would really appreciate any feedback, suggestions, or questions about my mission and vision statements as they are still a work in progress.
Answers
Stylem
Good. Perhaps include something about being mentally and physically healthy. “one” and “their” don’t go together. “If one sets one mind” is correct.
Sir Caustic
Advice? Sure. It's good that you want to learn all about fruit flies - they're important insects that are necessary to the environment/biosphere - but you should specify which genera you wish to learn about, as it's a very general area. For instance, you may be interested in the genus 'Drosophila melanogaster' (the common fruit fly) or genus 'Drosophila suzukii' (Asian fruit fly). And so on. Hope this helped.
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